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owner: Creator [Tsuki]
Ver.: Two
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Friday, 18 October 2013 at 01:53 with 0 comment(s)
“I love you,” his partner whispered. He held his partner’s hand tightly. It could’ve happened at any moment, the moment where the love of his life would disappear for the rest of his life.
“I love you too.” He whispered back. If his lover disappeared on him now, what was going to keep him sane?

“Tell me your favourite memory of us together,” his lover gasped. He bit the inside of his mouth, trying to choose one. There was too many to choose. The time where they were on their first date, not caring about the disapproving looks that they received for being a homosexual couple, when he first met him, when they were paired up for the same work group, basically every memory he had of his lover was his favourite.
“I guess it would be the day you said yes to me,” he smiled lovingly. He softly intertwined his fingers with his partner’s fingers and brought his partner’s hand to his lips. He then explained all the feelings he felt on that day. The anxiety, the joy, the fear he felt when he asked him to be his boyfriend. He had ignored all of flirtatious looks he received from girls at work; he only had his eyes at a certain male. Luckily for him, the male also had the same look he did on him.

Beeeeeep beeeeeep. Without even realising the hand he was holding went limp. He looked at the heart monitor and let out a choke. His lover had died. Tears streamed down his face as he let reality sink in. He tried to stop the sobs caught in his throat so that he wouldn’t cause a disturbance for any of the other patients but he couldn’t do it. He cried into the bed with heavy tears. The one he loved with his whole heart had disappeared.

After several minutes when he actually brought his act together, he glanced at his lover’s face and couldn’t help but smile sadly. His lover had died with a peaceful smile. He didn’t know how or why he could die with such a face but then again he was proud of him. He had been fighting the disease in his body for years until his body finally gave out. Even he didn’t know otherwise, he would’ve thought that his lover was just asleep, that he would wake up the next day.

He stroked his partner’s cheek softly before kissing him on the forehead. He turned around and stood in the doorway for a long time – looking back at his lover’s face, trying to memorise all the features before he disappeared. When he was done he stood at the door for a few seconds before closing the door. Closing out the strong need to just rush back in there and cradle the body. With that, he walked down the dark hallways with quivering shoulders – a sure sign that he was trying to not to cry.

He walked out of the hospital and stared solemnly at the ward where his partner rested before whispering something and turning around to disappear into the lonely streets.


“Goodbye my love.”

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Creator:
God damn, this was a struggle to type. I didn't even know how to end it. HAHAHA. Tried to make it... "Shounen Ai"-ish as possible as I could and depressing to so yeah. Not even sure if it's okay or not but yeah... Finished it in a day so not my best work really. Haha. Sorry.

Requested by 'Yaoi Bot'.
Request completed.

Story created on: 17 October 2013
Story completed on: 17 October 2013
Story posted on: 18 October 2013

   Copyrighted by Creator; any similarities are by coincidence
       Take anything from this story and the Creator will personally find you and slaughter you. ^^

Word Count: 525.